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NO SURRENDER
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IP:
Voted For: P.aradox
Fuck breakin it all down,
Phase your verse was not bad, but in my opinion was wayyyy to basic and your punches had no creativity..it flowed pretty well, structure was aight but drop the "" they too played and newbieish, decent voters can notice the wordplay without em.
Para,
you came pretty decent buty again i wasnt feelin some of the concepts you used. The reason you get my vote is for coming harded with punches and you used personals.
No hate
RTF IN 3 DAYS OR THIS VOTE GETS DQ'ED!!
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