...........THIS FLOWED NICELY.. THE LAST LINE WOZ WHT RELLI CAPTIVATED ME IT STOOD OUT MOST FOR ME OVERALL YEH THIS IS REAL NICE.. IS A SHAME IS REAL SHORT... CUD B SLIGHTLY LONGA
WUS GUD....... LIKE IT ... IT FLOWED NICELY AN IT WAS ALSO VERY CREATIV THE CONCEPT WAS GOOD AN CHOICE/USE OF WORDS WAS ALSO GUD AS IT PORTRAYED EMOTIONS NICELY.. HOWEVER IT WUD B NICE IF THIS WER LONGER.. OVERALL RELLI GUD........ KEEP DROPPIN FIRE ~1~
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this is the realest ####, you would think that Pac wrote it
but these lines ain't mine, i shine divine cause God spoke it!
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