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Old 06-19-05, 03:02 PM   #15
Kirk
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Voted For: Daubs

K-Trini-Your verse was alright... Nothing special... The punches weren't hitting very hard... only one that stoof out was the last line... but thats its... You weren't very consistent with your punches and your lines were stretched like mad... Although the last line was good it didn't make all that much sense.... But anyway... alright verse... nothing too creative.. mostly punches i've seen before...

Daubsy- I enjoy reading a verse from Daubs cause they're very creative with his punches... IP line was funny and humor is great to have in a battle... I didn't really get the second bar but i get the jist of it... and your last lines were very creative too... You basically won this because you had much better consistency, harder hitting punches, and more creativity.... So overall you got this homie...
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