WhoAreYou?
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IP:
Yo i was seriously feelin the emotion in this piece. it's one of those piece that makes you empathise with the writer and thats why i like it so much.
In this case the level of vocab don't really matter cos there's a high enough level in terms of content to make up for that. Structure was ok too.
honestly, i'd give this piece 8.5 outta 10.
Peace
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