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Old 06-19-05, 08:00 PM   #28
K-Trini
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Voted For: Diagnosis

flow-structure=Gongshow.Diagnosis....ur verse was all over the place.Next time...write it like how gongshow had it.Just hurt to look at it.

multis-Gongshow since diagnosis didn't have any

punches-gongshow cause Diagnosis was really unoriginal.All he spoke about was the kid's age.Nobody had werdplay or metas.But I'll give it to Gongshow.Next time,both of you,try to actually put some punchlines in it.


Vote-Gongshow(vote in the link below or this dq'd)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195795
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