Voted For: SpOkEn1

The Kid Got Crazy Spits, Steppin To Me Get Baked-N-Shipped....
This Fake-Is-Shit And I'll 'Screw A Belt To Your Waist' Like 'Replacement Hips'....
^^nice flowing.....but wak ass punch
Blow Your Chest-In-A-Bag Leave You Restin-Wit-Mags....
This Battle Like A 'Gays Takin A Quiz' The Way Im Testin-This-Fag....
^^^Ur testin hiM?
Im Prime-Contention So This Kid Certainly Wouldnt Mind-Attention....
But Its A Fact 'Spoken's Not Wanted Here' Like Fuckin 'Mime Conventions!!!'....
^^Mime shit is played
This Lame-Detected, One Shot Will Cause Brain-Erections....
Your Not Funny! The Only Time You Got Someone 'Crackin Up' Is Durin 'Caine-Injection!!!'....
^^OK
This Mayne Get Choke, When I Slice Veins-Wit-Spokes....
And My Bullets'll 'Poke-In-1's(Spoken1)' And Leave His 'Name In Smoke'....
^^weak ass werdplay

You had nice flow throughout the verse butyour punches were horrible.Onlyattempt at werdplay was the last line and that was garbage.

now.. time u "pan" down on wack emcees, like d12 i murder mitten,
only difference ill use a "butchers knive", so its domestic in the "kitchen",
^^stupuid....
if my lyrics were straight fire, theorotically speaking i would burn ya,
coz killing off your crew, is the only time u documenting murder,
^^Why would he kill his own crew,or u talkin bout u killin his crew?
like being in a booth, you need different things, like beats with acoustic,
but when u step in, you fuck up the cycle and thats how you murder musik,
^^OK
I heard u wanna be a drag queen, but yet u were raised in the ghetto?
does it make u feel bigger when u get raised in your stilletoes,
^^complmentin him sayin he from the ghetto
rappings like riding a bike... you never forget once you grow up,
but u still got stableizers, so i guess thats why this faggot never blew up
^^OK

Ur punches were weak.....but better than K.MurD3r.Main problem was that you had you were uncreative.YOu had no wordplay or metas.Change that next time

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