vote/ Lyrical

Reasoning: Both poems were good...Lyrical had strong emotion and imagery in his and I liked the base idea of the poem, it was really cool, just an all round nice drop. Os1ris, I think you would have taken this if you maybe restructured this a little bit more...to many one word lines and that. Content and that was good, had some emotion, and the twist was nice at the end. but still gotta give it to lyrical