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Old 06-19-05, 10:54 PM   #17
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Voted For: SNE DAWG

this was an ok battle

SNE Dawg - ur verse was alright..u tried some wordplay but it didnt work too well..ur punches?..not really..ur best line in ur verse was about sending back every bark he sends..the weedman line was kinda weak..but u did ur thing.....7/10




Ax Dogg - u had an alright verse..it flowed well..u didnt ret to strech ur lines too much..u had a few multis..u didnt really have any punches in there that i thought were very good..u did ok..nothing really special..u should check out the punchline cypher to get a better idea of a punch and to help you out.....5/10




SNE Dawg wins

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