Listening through Audio Technica ATH-M40fs's
The beat is cool except for that midi horn that comes in about where the hook would be. The midi piano ain't hot in my opnion either. Midi tones jsut don't blend well to me at all and always sound obviously synthesized.
The first verse: def hot man. lyrics was there and had the stagger needed to punctuate the lines. Nice deliv for the lyrics in the verse.
Hook: I liked it man.
Second verse: Sounds like a brand-X Jadakiss. Everything kiss brings to the table, just not kiss himself. Both a good thing and a bad thing. Identical annunciation, identical cadence, everything.
RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...391#post2226391