I liked this, may work a little bit on structure but overall this was a good piece. I think it would make a nice audio track actually if you made it bit longer. Concept was good, I like how you posed questions and how you switched back and forward between different emotions and thoughts. Went nicely into detail about the person's ideas and "reflections" as the title says. Emotion was nice, good written and interesting to read. Keep it up gurl!

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