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Old 06-20-05, 09:29 AM   #14
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Voted For: K-Trini

Goin oN one kNee for a dEad body iS only wAy ya fiNd yA "soul mAte"/
YOu stay sO deep inSide ya friEnds,you sMell wat yA own "paL-ate"/
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not feelin the concept an i'm failing too see the personal?

Sides maKin any moRe,worse thiNg you cAn do To ur verSe is subMit/
MoNey wouldn't "fLy" in yoUr pockets iF ya boXers were maDe a magNets/
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first line was givin him propps, second was verybasic


Turn ya sO self conScious,it'd be impOssible to evEn try to reBound/
BuRyin urself iN a gaRden still wouLdn't ripen yOu undeRground/
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decent concept, horribly worded

VerSes might Be decent.................................
if it waSn't bit,prEwrit,and laCked wit/
HolDin your alBum left a stAin on mY palm,duE to My grAsp on sHit/
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not sure osb has an album, but it was prolly you're best bar for real..

All you Do to rAp is coRRupt,with ur inAbility to sPit abrUpt/
& It not mY fault tHe only thIng you sLeep with pEe's staNding up/
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decent...........

Not a good verse, openin few bars was really weak man....lacked alot of personals, wordplay was a lil' basic too....some decent pun's here 'n there, but they were effectless 'cause of the lack of personals.......


OSB..

You're cocky acting has got me laughing... and I dick ride?
Are you 'sure/shore'? See this so-called truth begins to 'riptide',
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DECENT CONCEPT, SECOND LNE SHOULD OF BEEN WORDED MORE CREATIVELY

Ya speaking senselessly... Mention me and prepare for the worst,
Think you runnin away with the win, you need to carry it first,
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nice

I'm so tired, your flows fire? Well I'll be dismissing your bars,
Ya got an ego, your heads exceded the roof, like flipping in cars,
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nah, not feelin it..

I'm sure you got dope ryhmes but you're way to dumb to share it,
When I 'drop' I 'damage ya brain' like babies with clumsy parents,
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LOL, Made me laugh, decent hit..

This herbish hoecake's verse is so fake, K's gotten so dead soft,
Closest you'll come to 'defeatin' me is choppin my legs off..
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closer is played......

OSB, Good verse....decent wordplay trhoughout, had a few personals, nothin' too shameful tho'...punches were a lot more complex than K-Trini's.....you get my vote.


Good battle both, keep doin' ya' thing...nah mean

Vote/ OSB


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