Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Aii This is What I think

Acuity- Nice start off man You Reall know how to supply a good hook In Topicals and it hade me reading it until You started using To Many Words into one line which made it harder to follow I MEan It was nice drop but Yet I had to read through it Like 2 times Jus to get What you was really getting at in this battle Im Not hating and you know me better than that im jus hitting up slept on topicals and I feel that You Couldve done better In This Battle man considering your Level of skills Feel Me?

Super
Aii man Your storyline is the first thing that caught my attention It was nice I Mean It started of with a conflict ended with a Positive Conclusion and thats what made it pleasant to read And thats what made it easier to read lol excepting one thing .....YOUR STRUCTURE < >LOL I know a whole lotta people say Fuck Strcuture but with me I cant stand to see a good drop surrounded by a sloppy strcuture man I Cant Stand it LOL It makes it look all newbish so thats The only thin i Think You need to work on and Its not a really big Problem and u & I Know it So ......Yeah You Get my vote in this battle

GOOD BATTLE NICE DROP FROM BOTH OF YOU !!

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