The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP:
phenom- sounded like a freestyle, very basic rhyme schemes, not very effectively written, could have used more complexity and more effort.
omen- some of your lines were great, some were too textish for me- seemed like you used alot of unoriginal concepts that were just re-worded, either way, you can tell more effort when into this, and it was alot more solid than phenoms. vote omen.
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