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Old 06-20-05, 12:44 PM   #6
Triple_N
Ya mom massages my nuts
 
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Ya vocals are too low...ya flow is choppy....ya delivery is ok but inconsistent...ya rhyme scheme was real basic...u stayed the same from verse to verse...I do not like this hook at all...u jus didn't spit with enough energy....you didn't match the beat song ended up coming out boring....did u tell wicked to lick ya ass?...wtf?...dawg that is a very gay lien son....u shoulda thought twice bout that 1....overall meassge of track wasn't bad but u didn't really say much in the first place...I've hear du drop way better son...no hate jus realness.........1
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