1ndeph : Rather short but you had fantastic imagery, a simple yet effective approach at this topic. At times it didn't rhyme; which I know you probably did on purpose for a greater impact. But it just damaged you're whole flow, which set you back a category..

Overall - 45/100.

Macca : Ok, very generic vocabulary, simple storyline. You had a longer verse which puts you at a advantage. I felt some lines weren't constructed in the correct context, and quite a few lines seemed forced as fuck. But, you did have decent emotion and imagery and I felt you dropped a little harder than you're opponent..

Overall - 55/100.