Rastafari Walk Tall
From: East London, (Hackney) |
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Voted For: Daubs
VOte: Daubs
K trini- u gotta up your creativity, u need to come op with more original hard hitting punches, your structure was fine and ur shit flowed well, but u just didnt really damage daubs wid any of ur line..ur attempts at "wordplay" were well wack, at least ur trying though, basically u need personals n berrer punches...1
Daubs: some okay wordplay the shiz bout ropes was kinda played, ur line bout council tax was kinda funny, some elements of humour in drop, ur structure n flow was fine, u basically won with hard hitting n more creatine punches n personals...
Peace
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