Voted For: Compose

Topical battles usually get mad boring to me, but this actually interested.. Here's what I got out of it..

Tony Green
I didn't necessarily like the way you went about the topic, but you made it work. You used decent imagery, but good emotion to keep the reader interested. It may have been more interesting with some more inner rhyming or something like that, that just keeps your eyes glued, but regardless, it was still fairly easy to follow what you were saying. I also thought that your rhyme scheme could have been better. You forced a few rhymes throughout your peice which took away from the imagery that you were trying to display because it was almost like I was focusing more on the lack of rhyme then where you were trying to take my thoughts. But, regardless, you still kept good emotion, but the imagery and rhyme scheme probably should have been improved.

Compose
What I liked about your style is that you didn't try to force inner rhyming in. You still had some, but I found it more interesting that you were using wordplay throughout your peice. That kept my interested in reading by itself. I thought the way you went about the topic was pretty creative, but you executed it nicely. Your imagery was consistently good throughout the peice, as was the emotion. The part I liked most was the end, though. The way you tied everything together was dope. Overall, just a good job.

Overall
I like creativity.. which is why I liked the way Compose went about going through his topic more. However, both of them were executed pretty nicely. Compose also had better imagery throughout the peice, but the emotional aspect was pretty close to even. This came down to who's I was more interested in and the combination of wordplay, inner rhyming, imagery, emotion, and creativity bought it for me. My vote goes to Compose.

Vote - Compose

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