I think it has the potential to be a great piece.But it just fell short in certain parts.
See the flow? even though it was an audio piece, it was mad choppy inbetween bars
fix that dawg, i mean i do audio to, but the flow doesn't have to be that choppy
a different bar structure could help, lyrics were good, concept? i seen it before but good
Overall:7/10. nice drop though..thought provoking!!!

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