Voted For: GKillaz05

You’re the worst GK.. but face it.. your text is dormant
& when GK hits the pad.. he uses extra absorbent
^^lil played...but still decent
Stay pounding you w/ these punches.. & I’ll crack the mold
But your verse has more dots n’ dashes..
..than Morse codes
^^decent again like bar before
In text your weak.. plus.. your punches amount to shit
GK soils his pants.. he added water & created a rain forest
^^Rain forest in his pants...dun see a diss
You kind of remind me of Jay-Z – out there wrecking the sales
Also.. minus the flow, album hype, plus everything else
^^Still,comparisoon to a legend is a no-no
Your not a very good employee.. so I’m about to give you the boot
& your sitting at your computer.. surfing the net.. wearing a wet-suit
^^^horrible

Your best line in this whole thing was in the 1st. bar.When battlin...dun compare someone on the net to someone in the big leagues.Flow/structure was OK.Punches need improvement.

Your so whack, you might as well check-in and not spit...
I'll set your toilet on fire, just so you got hot shit...
^^uncreative and weak.......
Your winnin' streak ima stop it, Kid get ready to lose...
fuck kinda name is Smoove?.. musta been drinkin' booze...
^^^Okay...but sumtin more complex would be better
All your lyrics hear is boo's.. like there were ghosts...
Wanted 2 prewrite his verse so he ignored all my posts...
^^ignoring ya post...how that relates to prewritten
Your raps are burnt like toast, no one whould bite it...
Wouldnt be surprised if you got your mother to write it...
^^1st line was good,but 2nd was lacking
Gettin' all excited like a dog, about to piss yourself...
Rhymes are retarded... when you spit you diss yourself...
^^^okay

Ur punches lacked a lot....but still way better than Smoove.I didn't see any werdplay or metas by you.Very uncreative verse.But I hope you wasn't really tryin because this was weak.Still enough for the W.

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