Nice drop, i must admit, had couple lines i could relate to
the emotion was there, but it's not what kept my interest
Your structure was dope, flow fell in some parts, 1 or 2 i think
but overally i was impressed, i saw the title and was like,
"not another sad story"/played concept, but you shocked me
8/10 all it's missing is a really good hook....deUce

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