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Old 06-21-05, 02:01 AM   #20
Typical
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This was feedback posted for sabotage

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sab...
opener was creative but worded fucked so was next bar, again really good concept but fuck wit ur wording...
.closer left it wide open...didnt feel it...BUT GOOD METAS

daubs
i dont check links... thats fuckin wak...
2nd bar was funny as hell but couldve been worded a lot better
closer didnt make any sence to me really wak

both of u needv to stop explaining shit ...NO MORE LINKS!...

daubs aint winnin for one line and sab's verse was really creative tho lacking in flow...
i cant vote on this...
its a tie to me...
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