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Old 06-21-05, 06:47 AM   #34
criminal
Banned: Biting
 
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This was feedback posted for K-Trini

IP:

Leave Ya Lyriks "Unstable",Similiar To A Disabled Being
Have Ya Expiriencing "Horrific Clips",Like The "Scene" Your Gonna Be Fleeing
ok

Throwin Up the "White-Flag",But its Too Late To Surrender
Have Ya Lookin Like a "Bitch",SO I Advice You To--
Change Your Accurate "gender"
ok

the Only Way You Would get "Feed-Back" Is If You Put Your "Stomach" ON Ya Microphone
Cuz Ya "Bars" Is "Weak",Like "Prison Cellz" Made Out Of "Styrofoam"
(Came Below Ma MINIMUM,Cuz You Aint Ready Homie)!
nice ending




Comparing me to you....... is like comparing cursive to print/
Skillfullness at weildin a "axe" still wouldn't give ya "persistance"/
ok but didnt flow well

I got mad beef,but sayin you wack........... is sumtin we can all agree/
You'll commit suicide after masterbating just to "die-nasty"/
weak bar

"Applause" at your concert's like an abandoned house..........only "SILENT"/
"Abrations" in your jowls still couldn't make your spits "violent"/
preety good

Ur shit "clogs" up the air so bad that my ears start to SNEEZE/
Ur rhymes are as "raw" as homeade macaroni and cheese/
haha had me laughin

Wall Street n Twist=a whack ass diss,ya bassicallly burning ya own bridges/
Called "Ghost"?well rightfully so,cause ya songs provide "false images"/
aight

So your supposed to be a ghost,and the 1st. word in ya crew is LIVING?/
You could suck a "pilot's" dick.........but ya still wouldn't head to "elevatin"/
dont rhyme but decent punch

Tryna make a bunch a tough threaths,sayin how you'll lyrically slaughter??/
I'll see bigger splashes from "WHALES" flippin underwater/
decent ending

my vote k trini he was more consistent in punches and mad me laugh