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Old 06-22-05, 05:04 AM   #54
Sik Wit It
 
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Voted For: hotshh!

U got merked twice by Misk, another loss u wouldnt Risk It
Figured cant beat em join em, Then U jumped on his Clicks Dick
—koo opener
U Misfit, I switch gears like a Stick Shift, to Kill you Faster
Since when do "Living Legends" make kids " Die with Laughter"?
—nice
Weak Bastard.....shit, You cant achieve " a Level of Excellence"
So I'll heat you up faster than peppers eaten by Mexicans
—eh, this one was weak
U couldnt be a "G" with Gotti's Heart, kid drunk on Bacardi Dark
Who thought " Saving Hip Hop" was fixing Dislocated Body Parts!
—aight
Im breaking your arms, Blocking ya punches, Running Your Bars
You couldnt 'Rep the Hood' If U shouted out the Front of Ya Car
—okay
I told crews to keep these newbs away........They No Hear Me
Dont hafta drop the 'Z' from ya name, to see Hot Khao Theory
—nice closer

Overall – your drop was coo, punches were hard-hittin, had
some personas up in there, structure was decent + the flow
was on-point in this battle, you had a decent drop though,
seen better from you hotshh



still New, but you? over 2 thousand posts, still aint ''On top''
Twice u finished 3rd, i mean c'mon, who needs 2 Shots?
—koo opener
ur suppose 2 be ''Hot''..........plz say not one ov da best?
took u 2 years, No more, No Less...
..& look at ur achievements, r we suppose 2 be impressed?
—no
we show little 2 no Intrest In-ur-self....its obvious ur Obsessed
''Droppin knowledge''?..lol ''Titty-Feedin'' iz da only tyme ur ''Abreast''*
—okay
You's a MESS, Literally, they gon be scrapin yuh ''Peeled-Cap'' off da Block
Veteran? last tyme ''east met west'' we all kno da ''Big-Man'' Got SHOT
—weak, didn’t like this one
u cant stop da inevitable, its..lyke college girls, juz ''give it up''
medicine manz syck?..closest he ever got wuz complainin ov a ''Hiccup''
—okay, u could’ve made this line, way better
Lyrikal stick-up, remove hands frum da ''keys'' lyke u dropped ''cocaine''
=End Ov Establishments Reign=
...Theyre addicted 2 my ''Dope''...call hotshh da ''Bird-brain''
—wack closer

Overall – your drop was okay here, the structure needs some help,
the flow also needs some help too, vocab also needs help, & the punches
were okay here, could’ve been way better, but wasn’t, but you didn’t
come as hard as hotshh in this battle
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