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IP:
I really felt this..
Your first stanza set everything up & drew me into the poem more..
I mean the first two stanzas had great emotion portrayed with simple vocabulary..
Which to me, made it very powerful..
I like the whole 2 stories to this piece, if I'm right..
Well thats how I thought of it as; & the ending..
Was tight, nice twist..
Keep dropping..
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