Beautiful....the emotion is flowing, the metaphors are heavy, and this piece is simply a joy to read. The only critique I have, is that it was a little difficult to read, because your sentences ran together on different lines (just my opinion)...other than that great drop!!! Overall 9/10

oh yeah, J.Terror...poetry doesn't always have to rhyme...expand ya mind a lil, and allow the words to speak to u.

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