Voted For: R-Rated

R.....................

Nice verse, really camer hard with the name play, propps for that.,...punches hit they mark like you planned them too.

Waldo shit is played, but other then that, you're originality was down too a T, Nice verse, you killed pitcure with it....not much more i can say on your peice but Tight drop!


Pitcure..........

Verse was far too basic, wasnt feelin the closer in which you said was ill, nothin much came out of the personal you attempted, punches were basic, not very effective for real dog...

propps on the r-rated screening bar tho...it was decent, stood out, could of came alot harder, need too be more creativite an imaginative with the wordplay.......

Vote=R-Rated

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Peace out y'all, good job both.

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