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Old 06-22-05, 03:36 PM   #57
.Barz Of Steel.
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OSB:

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch

LOL Good

Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,

LMFAO Nice

Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,

Good

"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*

Nice personal

O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...

LOL Nice closer man

You had a real good verse man. Short and sweet. All of your punches connected and hit him hard. You had a nice play on his name, and a few other nice personals. Everything flowed together fine so the structure wasn't a problem. Nice verse.

Stanza:

Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest

Blah

Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic

Fake personal...his OM with Drakel had like 5 pages of responses

This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me

Failed to see the punch

Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match

WTF??? Doesn't make sense

Stanza, you came weak. Punches werent hitting or connecting, personals were fake, and you didnt have any good metas or wordplay. The only thing you really had was flow, that doesn't win battles man.

V/ OSB
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