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Old 06-22-05, 04:32 PM   #58
Sik Wit It
 
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Voted For: Stanza

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
decent opener
Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
no
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
no, this punch was wack
"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
okay, could’ve been harder
O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...
nope

overall.. ur drop was weak.. ur structure was okay, the flow
was lackin’.. & the vocab needs help.. but overall ur punches
could’ve been a lot harder (don’t know how u beat me), but
elevate on ur punches


Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
okay
Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
this one was aight
This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
no
Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match
okay, this bar could’ve been harder too

overall ur drop was weak also.. the structure was okay..
the flow was aight here, vocab needs help too.. & the punches
need improving here.. but they came a little harder than
osb though.. but elevate on your punches
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