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Old 06-22-05, 05:09 PM   #60
B. Magik
Sam Dope
 
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OSB-Your verse was excellent man...All punches connected and hit, structure was fine, and it flowed smoothly all the way thru...Not a weak pun or personal in your whole verse...LMAO at the kool aid line...You had some creative wordplay and meta's in here, and overall, you murdered him.

Stanza-Ya verse was weak...Not only did your punches not connect, but some didn't even make any sense, like your closer for example...What the hell dude?? Structure and flow were fine, but you had no good personals on him. You were not very creative or consistent in this battle, so therefore, you don't get the vote.

V/ OSB
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