Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Damn B.M.... I didnd't know you were so skilled in topicals... but that was rather dope... imagery was good as fuck too man...

so much put on his mind, how could he handle tha strain
love dismantled tha flame, a mere candle in rain
^loved that line

with u, why am i so soft, a man but as a savage he wept
lost in a hole, from my soul, as big as a galaxies depth
^loved that line as well

Nice story... nothing to creative but still good... could have been a little more creative but i liked the way you told the story and what not... and how you broke it down


Cali your verse was alright... the thing that gives my vote to black magik is the fact that yours didn't want me to keep reading, nothing kept me interested... overall it was good though, nice story telling aswell just not as interesting as B.M.'s... Rather basic...

Vote- Black Magik

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