Voted For: Tekneek
First taste of real gladiator, serve him like irate wasted waiters, end up with 10 digits on your face like basic calculators…
Tek call's out all imitators, you ‘outta line’ like ‘illiterate narrators’ and couldn’t catch a beat packin rhyme defibrillators.
^^Well...Okay I guess
Hope ya religious, it over before its finished,.u can’t win this, cuz Tek throw shots puttin death on this bitches wish list..
You just miss kid, and Tek leave ya showered wit disses, it could be your birthday and you still couldn’t come gifted…
^^Birthday/christmas and gifted shit is played
Bring wack spits and get ripped with apocalyptic tactics, show him the end is near like naive Vietnam draft pics…
Rhymes is plastic, kid ain’t severe, he anti-climatic, bitch couldn’t ‘match up’ sparkin phosphorous fabrics…
^^^Ok.....didn't hit
This tha true test, tek chew vets and leave crews vexed, beat ya dome with texts and leave em wit loose necks
This fools next, show who’s best when head smacks through chest, left this kid noddin like he was sayin ooh-yes…
^^well....didn't hit
Main problem with your verse was that it lacked hard hittin punches.Ur flow was beautiful but punches lacked.Nice structure too.WAt ya need is some werdplay or metas.Keep werkin....punches will come.I did see u had some decent similies.
This guys technique for rappin is just copy and paste
Tekneek dont win he just PM for votes, man he a waste
^^If he PM for votes...he'd get banned,weak punch
Man the only way ull win is if he used his birthday wishes for wishin
Man ill cut ur hopes and dreams wit certain precision like a circumcision
^^^Flowed nice....but didn't hit hard
U hide ur real skill like a bald man in denial who wears a fuckin toupee
Ill leave ur tekneek dead wit one spray, he’ll be losin in any other way
^^OK
U Got a 3-0 record and ima bout to give him his first loss to his rec.
U aint capable of goin against me newbie so next time just get it correct
^^OK.....mediocre
Ur shit was basic and weak.You came hard against me in
open mic.....but wat happened here?Hopefully this was keyed.MAin problem wit ur verse was that you ain't have werdplay or metas.Not even a similie.You were bassically stain stuff...gotta be indirect.
Vote-Tekneek(vote in link below homie)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851