Voted For: Stanza

Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
^^why would he get wins hangin round fans?,decent 2nd line though
Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss
^^1st line was hot,but 2nd wasn't
Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet
^^Nice

This was a decent verse.Flow was OK.Stucture was nice.Didn't like that 1st. line.When you said wins....did you mean wind?If so....then in the verse,you shoulda put "win/wind" so we'd get it.But still....a good verse.

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
^^^Nice name play
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
^^^didn't like this verse,1st line was rhymed words thrown together
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
^^too basic and weak

You started off excellent....but then faded.That steal a win/jack shit line would have been decent if put together better.And that last line was too basic and straightfoward.

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