Voted For: R-Rated


I 'punch' like 'Tony Tarver* my 'hits jab' wit 'jaggid blades', 'fitted' wit~more~'ridges'~then~a~bag~ov'~Lays'
My rymes fully 'sarrated` to maximize 'damage~to~text' My lines pack muscle` your's cant 'manage~to~flex'
^^flow good....but where's the punch?
'Ravage necks' wit 'cut throat style` as I 'cratered~his~chest`'served' this hater like a 'waiter' and 'catered~his~flesh`
Like a 'bag' on your 'head` i'll have you 'gaspin fo' breath` call me 'moses` I'll 'part' ya 'skull' and put ah 'gap~in~yo~head'
^^again,got flow....but where's the punch?
Eat ya' 'heart whole' and leave you 'cast' like the 'dead~sea~scrolls' you 'bastard` get 'blasted' till ya 'head~piece~rolls'
I'l leave you dazed and confused when I smoke~ya' ~herb` Abuse Flu' in boots' wit cali smiles** till' I broke~the~curb
^^same thing as the other ones

Just like in your battle with Pen&Paper...you had flow but really lacked in punches.Only problem this time is that ur battlin a skilled vet.Seriously.....work on your punches.Wordplay,metas.

Kid You Rap With No Heart...Like Night of The Living Dead Organ Donars..
Your Pussy..Your Like A Transvestite Pimp The Way You're Forging Boners..
^^Liked the 1st line...but 2nd was mediocre
You Can't Stand My Weight..Like Bridges Not Made For 3 Ton Trucks..
Cause The Only Time You Handle Weight...Is In Your 3 Ton Fucks..
^^didn't like rhmye scheme,but an ight punch
Your Like A Sports Coach...They Way This Pussy Is Pulling Strings..
But I Dont Mean Strings As In Sports...I Meant That Tampon Thing..
^^yo..period and tampon shit is played to death.
You've Been Fucked Since You Entered..Like Women Becoming Nuns..
and You Remind Me of Punk Rock Fans..They Way You Lacking Puns..
^^ighht
My Verse Will Leave Ya Mentally Fucked..Like John Holmes Get'n Head..
Plus Your Verse Has Less Action Than Two Homophobics In A Bed..
^^LOL...nice

Well...far from ur best,but you claim it was keyed...so OK.Ur best line was the last one about 2 homophobics in bed.Ur worst line was tampon one.Flow was OK,structure was excellent.No blowin away punches in this bitch...but still enough to give ya the win.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851