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Old 06-22-05, 11:38 PM   #9
Sik Wit It
 
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From: Florida
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Voted For: sabotage

This kid is unoriginal, he stole his name from that ‘Nolia’ Kid
Fold ya quick..you got no muscle that’s why I say this ‘Souljah’s Slim’
wack opener
When I look at your crew’s roster..Documented Murder looks empty
Call the medics..after this battle DM is gonna need an MD*
okay
You got no kind of punches and nothing to say against me
Cause Souljah borrows other peoples lines..so its safe to say the he’s renting
not so great here
This faggot is already died ‘Jah’ is where I sent his ‘Soul’ to**
And I don’t have to play the people game for RV to see that I own you
nope
Just another internet gangster..stop livin the lie
Cause the only time you got a 9’s..when you holding a penny short of a dime
lie & dime.. hardly rhyme


When you fucked wid me my patience went out da window,
The only time you spit dope's when you're deep tokin indo,
decent
Directing petty beef at me,oh my days, my nigga please,
Yo i don't need the family, on my jays i'll bring you to your knees,
nope
Yo i'd beat you down but you already black n blue,*
Nigga move i'll murk your ass quicker than you hop crews,**
weak
I'll leave you feelin smaller than the apos' in your title,
Breakin you down til da life support machine be vital,
weak
Nigga you a dignified shit talker at the most,
All talk, 63 per cent of your name spells boast...
closer was aight

overall sabotage took this one.. punches were just harder
hitting.. but both of u need to elevate.. add some personas
in ur rhymes also..
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