Ka.Nek.ShuN
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Voted For: Mimesis
ok this was a pretty good battle, narc u came ok, mimesis u came dope, like usual... lol lets get to crackin...
mimesis - mim ur verse was dope, your punches hit hard like always, you got gud wordplay, structure was practicly flawless, your whole verse flowed well all the way throughout and didnt fall off at any point, your vocab was good... you had a tight opener and closer.. good drop... 8.5/10
narc - your verse was alot more genralised, punches didnt hit near as hard as mims, your verse flowed ok but it fell of at some points making it hard to read, your structure needs improvment, you need to shorten ur lines, by stretching they cause the effect to be lost.. you need to work on ur vocab, overall it was an aiight verse
7/10
opener - M
closer - M
flow - M
Punches - M
Structure - M
complexity - M
vote - M, no hate just how i saw it...
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