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NO SURRENDER
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Voted For: NaRc-UzI
EZ....
gods, you had a decent structure, but thats the only props i can give you really...your verse was packed with fillers, no punches or personals so you need to fit them in next time man. A verse without them = wack.
Narc
You definately get this battle, although your structure was weak and the ""are wack you still had punchlines through out. Some were creativer and nice, others didnt really hit. But you get my vote for actually using punches.
NO HATE< RTF WITHIN 3 DAYS SO I DONT GOTTA DQ THIS VOTE!!
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