On the real, I only peeped this because I seen you were from the field. Your flow is kinda cheesy to me, like you stall real long some times like "missy elliot is like.................................lose..con.... troll" then other times you rush the hell out of it to get all the words in. The mixing isn't as smooth as could it be or consistant. That acapella skit is the first off-beat acapell I've ever heard. I think it's your voice that I'm not big on, but your lumpy flow and stretched portions dosen't help much either. It was easy to tell this track isn't anywher near 400 bars since you have a distinct intro and a distinct outro. So this is 100 bars (at most). No one's realistically gonna listen to other pieces of the shit if the first 100 ain't grab em.

BTW, you use a line IDENTICAL to j-bridge in "one more time". Lemme find out you heard that shit and snacked a line kid. The Rush will come see you with zero hesitation, lol.

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