I'm feelin it. Its real true to heart. Structure or not it was a nice drop. Your ending kinda fell off for me, the rest of the piece made me feel like it was leading to something more, not just what it was. It's only the last line though, the rest of it was great, deep and emotional.

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"It's the knowledge of the youth untold
Our roots ungrown, so when the truth unfolds
You will realize and know it's me
I told you my story through the eyes of poetry
I ran for the light, darkness soon banned from my life
And I'd be damned for the strife
but I'm as deep as my words...so I AM what I write" - Prolific