what im sayin is its very nice. deep and intracate, the wordplay was very good. you showed emotion, you showed that you wanted to be touched and felt, and dealth with in a sensual manner, this brought out alot of feelings that you have trapped in you. you pored it out on the net to let ppl know that you would like to share this with one special guy in your life. to sum it up i like this piece alot.
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happy now ma.