Thread: ReBirth
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Old 06-24-05, 12:33 AM   #3
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this was ok, it kinda rambled on sometimes. but it had some decent lines in there ok flow, but you need to work on some meta's or multies or somethin to make ya joint stand out, ya feel me? i give it a 7/10,
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