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Old 06-24-05, 03:17 AM   #10
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Voted For: Wall Street

easy easy win for wall street

k-trini,,, you rhymed times with times... not impressive at all..your vocab was eh but you need to get rid of the ~ things they are very noobish.. your flow was choppy the whole way through ... and your punches werent very strong
I'll merk u,spittin 1 line,1 time,while you~go-twenty-times~
Got da cleanest tape cause it been brushed off~so-many-times~
that was blah.... thats what lost the battle for ya it was weak

wallstreet nice drop over all nothing to special but your rhyme scheme was much better and you had a overall better verse... your stuff was orginal which is always good... no need for the opener and closer thing.. and try to match your lines more

overall cuz of a better word choice and for not rhyming times with times and not having weaker punches

my honest vote goes to wallstreet
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