Voted For: Wall Street

K-Trini

Wall Street won't spit smooth and hard if they~sold-boulders~
U could set ya arms on fire,but you'd still get the~cold-shoulder~
ok
You could be a stripper,but nodody'd even toss you a coin
Nobody'd go on one knee for you,if you cracked their joints
not good
I'll merk u,spittin 1 line,1 time,while you~go-twenty-times~
Got da cleanest tape cause it been brushed off~so-many-times~
meh

Ok look, stop with all the "~~~", and the explenations aren't needed, also you came with a forced ryhme scheme dude and try to spell properly man, none of that "da" shit, but overall I saw 2 "meh" bars. Nothing really stood out.

Wall Strizzle:
Yep, It True You Getting Called Out Ppl Just Want Easy Wins
But You Wouldn't Stick To This Board, If Your Punches Were Pins
not bad but played concept
Listen Dawg... You Get Shit On Like A Toilet Kid
Only Heat You Drop Is Gaz...Ass Spoiled & Shit
ok
Aluminum Barracks..Shit I'll Still Foil This Trick
He's Not Spitting Smooth........With Oil On His Lip
ok

You had a better verse but try coming more complex, you weren't as forced though, however you dont need to have a "opener" and "closer" and stop with all the capitols infront of every letter and having your verse bold, it's wack, other then that, you took this one.

v// Wall Streat for a more solid verse

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