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Old 06-24-05, 06:07 AM   #6
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Then as it was, then again it will be
Though the course may change sometimes
Rivers always reach the sea

We are eagles of one nest
The nest is in our souls

^A couple of the most beautiful lines in my opinion, I enjoyed reading this poem. You portrayed such a strong emotion, pure and serene, all of that worded so nicely! Imagery was there a bit with the metaphors but the best aspect was the emotion of course!
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