I am truly impressed actually, I read the entire thing because once you start reading it's like you cannot stop. Such a high amount of pure, powerful emotion you portrayed here combined with imagery and such insightful lines. I love how you kept your vocabulary simple because it really gives the reader the feeling that a little girl wrote it you know. The picture is a nice add-on to visualize the entire thing but your words would've been enough I think. Excellent piece!

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