Haha this was dope, so true too, i can relate to this poem as i think others will, i like the set-up of it and how you presented it.Nice vocab,metaphors, this was a true piece, had style and all, and was also universal in the fact that other poets can read it and understand, good shit man..keep dropping.1

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