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Old 06-24-05, 11:32 AM   #9
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Voted For: Mad Dog

Mad Dog:
Pretty Nice, all the punches hit well, I like the 4th Bar, nice punch
Could've used a few more syllables in places so it read better.

Marv: Honestly This verse wasnt as bad as i expected, but you hyped yourself too much, and only really had one punch that hit in my eyes.
I think thats why Mad dogs Verse hit so hard.
You need to stop typin n00b like, and type text like, spell shit proply and lose all the 'Underdog' Whateer shit, just type man.

Plus you said Fam too much in the last bar.
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