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Old 06-24-05, 12:08 PM   #11
chaotic.
real O.G
 
From: chi~town
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Voted For: R-Rated


werd

~R~-ok nice quick key had some punches in there and good flow and very nice structure. nothing overall bad in your verse just come a little harder

tek- i don't like your stye but thats just me..i feel you need better punches that hit harder but good flow and weird but okay structure..but i felt R came harder wit better punches

next time both come harder yall can do betta

v/R
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