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Old 06-24-05, 03:09 PM   #57
K-Trini
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Voted For: illmatico

My punches connects to his jaw like fat bitches and Ho Hos
Kause I throw blows that makes you lose tha feelin in ya toes
^^^self glorifyied in tha whole bar
Catch 5 elbows in slow mo, leave you on the corner froze
Give you a runny nose that glows red on ya new clothes
^^^weak
illmatico claims there's hoes on this site, he wants to see a vet
You found 1 breakin no sweat like a black gurl fightin a brunette
^^^wak

Ur shit was wak.......and come on....how ya gon drop 6 lines only?You bassically had 0 decent punchlines.Step ya game up.

you beatin me will never come so ya mission is jilted
ya punches always off target cuz yo vision is tilted
^^^weak
but guess what, i coulda been takin a shit and still baked ya
cuz yo ass is farther from makin a hit than lou bega
^^OK
you dont want it wit the kid- I bid you farewell without kisses
and i dont have to the played out tilt disses
^^so wat if ya have tilted disses....c'mon,give sumtin
its funny cuz i used one and you still wont go far
i'll spit my whole 'rap backwards' and you still below 'par
^^OK'
they say dogs dont trail far from home and thats true for this prick
from his daddy's nuts and still wanna live on my dick
^^OK

Well....you had some decent punches in there.A pretty weak verse.U'd get killed against a vet.Plus you had more lines than the other guy which provides a big advantage

Vote-Illmatico(vote in linkk below or I'll have vote dq'd)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589
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