Voted For: Smoove

smoove took this one...and heres tha breakdown:


You’re the worst GK.. but face it.. your text is dormant
& when GK hits the pad.. he uses extra absorbent
this was an ight opener. i didnt like how you used his name once in each line. you only needed it once in tha whole bar, but its coo. but tha second line is what made this a good bar. that was creative, and a funny diss. not exactly a personal, but a good diss.

Stay pounding you w/ these punches.. & I’ll crack the mold
But your verse has more dots n’ dashes..
..than Morse codes
this was some more funny, clever shit. this was a really good bar

In text your weak.. plus.. your punches amount to shit
GK soils his pants.. he added water & created a rain forest
it seemed like u forced this bar to be in ur verse, but its coo. didnt really hurt you, it was still nice


You kind of remind me of Jay-Z – out there wrecking the sales
Also.. minus the flow, album hype, plus everything else
on tha first line, i was like ight. "its coo, but nothing big..." , then tha second line, i was hella weak. that was some funny, unplayed shit. you threw me for a loop on that one, wasnt expectin it.


Your not a very good employee.. so I’m about to give you the boot
& your sitting at your computer.. surfing the net.. wearing a wet-suit
this was just ight wordplay. tha end of this bar is was made it ight. couldve been better[

overall, i think this verse was about a 7.5/10. about 2 bars couldve been reworded better, and had a lil more thought into em, but they were still coo. i was feelin this verse. yo disses were on point, and so was ur flow, and you punches. you came real hard on this one, and i think you took tha battle.


gkillaz05 verse:

Your so whack, you might as well check-in and not spit...
I'll set your toilet on fire, just so you got hot shit...
this was an ight opener, but toilet lines are played

Your winnin' streak ima stop it, Kid get ready to lose...
fuck kinda name is Smoove?.. musta been drinkin' booze...
this bar was wack. just because it rhymes dont mean is a punch or a good diss. put some more thought in to it.

All your lyrics hear is boo's.. like there were ghosts...
Wanted 2 prewrite his verse so he ignored all my posts...
i could see u tried at a personal here, but you just fell short. it was wayy to simple. shouldve put more thought into it.

Your raps are burnt like toast, no one whould bite it...
Wouldnt be surprised if you got your mother to write it...
fuck readin tha rest...all you gota do is look at tha end of your lines, and see that this shit is simple. your rhyming is too simple, and your barz arent making any sense, they just rhyme, but have no meaning to em

Gettin' all excited like a dog, about to piss yourself...
Rhymes are retarded... when you spit you diss yourself...
first line was an attempt at a descent closer, but then you messed it up, and came wit tha stupid bar. which made no sense, and had no meaning to it.

overall, i felt ur verse was wayy too simple to take this win. i felt you came off wayy too soft. you shouldve put more thought into a lot of bars. some of em were unneccessary bars. i think you should really elevate urself., but a descent try.

[b]so, i think smoove took this one, because he showed more consistentcy, and he came off a lil stronger wit tha punches and wordplay.


RTF on one of tha battles in sig, or this vote will be removed in 34 hrs.