{Propain}:

Nice shit man...Feeling your story...It was fun to read, and every other line made me want to keep going...Very good imagery and emotion put into this piece...Vocab was good, but could be better, but Ovrall, I was feeling it.

DQ:

Iight good piece here, imagery was decent, emotion was there, vocab was fine, but it wasnt all that interesting...I dunno, I just wasnt feeling your story...Something about it just seemed really boring, so I am giving my vote to {Propain}

V/ {Propain}

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